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This session is designed for those who prefer clear, focused feedback without a live call.
You can send me your manuscript, illustration portfolio, or project, and I will take the time to review it carefully and thoughtfully. I approach your work with both a creative and editorial eye, looking at what is already working, where it can be strengthened, and how it can move forward.
All feedback is delivered in a written PDF, so you can return to it whenever you need.
My feedback includes:
the placement of your story within the current picture book landscape
your expected target audience
a comprehensive review of your work, focusing on how well your story connects to its intended reader, its impact, and originality
clear, actionable feedback on your writing or illustration style, structure, and pacing, with suggestions for refinement
honest insight into the commercial potential of your project
practical exercises to help you work on structural weaknesses and strengthen your storytelling skills
After your purchase, you’ll automatically receive an email with a link to a short submission form.
There, you can upload your manuscript, illustration portfolio, or project, and answer a few questions about your work and what you’re hoping to get from the feedback.
Once I’ve received everything, I’ll begin reviewing your project. You’ll receive your personalised written editorial assessment within 7 business days.
This option is ideal if you’re looking for professional, honest feedback and clear direction, while working independently and at your own pace. If you would prefer a more personal approach, with the opportunity to discuss your project together, you can choose the One-to-One Editorial Session instead.
This session is designed for those who prefer clear, focused feedback without a live call.
You can send me your manuscript, illustration portfolio, or project, and I will take the time to review it carefully and thoughtfully. I approach your work with both a creative and editorial eye, looking at what is already working, where it can be strengthened, and how it can move forward.
All feedback is delivered in a written PDF, so you can return to it whenever you need.
My feedback includes:
the placement of your story within the current picture book landscape
your expected target audience
a comprehensive review of your work, focusing on how well your story connects to its intended reader, its impact, and originality
clear, actionable feedback on your writing or illustration style, structure, and pacing, with suggestions for refinement
honest insight into the commercial potential of your project
practical exercises to help you work on structural weaknesses and strengthen your storytelling skills
After your purchase, you’ll automatically receive an email with a link to a short submission form.
There, you can upload your manuscript, illustration portfolio, or project, and answer a few questions about your work and what you’re hoping to get from the feedback.
Once I’ve received everything, I’ll begin reviewing your project. You’ll receive your personalised written editorial assessment within 7 business days.
This option is ideal if you’re looking for professional, honest feedback and clear direction, while working independently and at your own pace. If you would prefer a more personal approach, with the opportunity to discuss your project together, you can choose the One-to-One Editorial Session instead.